Sorry for the layout problem. I did not mean to miss a line and the picture did not cover the writing on my computer. It is supposed to be as follows:
Red did the catch on her red fox skin coat and thought for the thousandth time what she was doing. She liked Tanya after all but her loyalty to the Coven was stronger. The door creaked steadily open to a most astonishing sight. The Coven had brushed up well then. Red was very surprised.
I’d love to know what you think. Remember to follow the blogging guidlines. By the way when I said ‘aesthete’ I meant esoteric.
Hi Grace,
I really liked your story as it was full of description and painted a clear image in my mind. Your story is really exciting, I can’t wait to read on. As you said your layout went a bit weird but apart from that your story was great.
Sorry for the layout problem. I did not mean to miss a line and the picture did not cover the writing on my computer. It is supposed to be as follows:
Red did the catch on her red fox skin coat and thought for the thousandth time what she was doing. She liked Tanya after all but her loyalty to the Coven was stronger. The door creaked steadily open to a most astonishing sight. The Coven had brushed up well then. Red was very surprised.
I’d love to know what you think. Remember to follow the blogging guidlines. By the way when I said ‘aesthete’ I meant esoteric.
Hi Grace,
I really liked your story as it was full of description and painted a clear image in my mind. Your story is really exciting, I can’t wait to read on. As you said your layout went a bit weird but apart from that your story was great.