Wow! This is a good piece of writing. Also, when I have read some other 100wc, not many people use speech. I am very happy that you did some speech. Well done! Keep up the good work. I hope you go on the 100 word challenge next week. From Joseph. Here’s a link to go on our blog quicker than typing it http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Anna I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry. I especially love how you began your writing with speech – It made me feel like I was there. I look forward to seeing more of your entries 🙂 keep up the good work!
Well done Anna, what a fantastic 100wc. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. Your use of speech was super and they way you began your piece of writing really captured my interest and made me want to read on. I love the way you ended your writing, leaving it on a cliff hanger really makes your reader think about what could happen next.
Keep up the fantastic work 🙂
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Hi Anna! Well done with your story this week – I really enjoyed it. You made the reader feel nice and safe, listening to Grandpa’s story, and then, with a neat twist at the end, you made us all feel rather nervous! Excellent. Well done, using speech too – it worked so well, and launched the reader straight into the story. I’ll look forward to seeing more of your work!
Wow! This is a good piece of writing. Also, when I have read some other 100wc, not many people use speech. I am very happy that you did some speech. Well done! Keep up the good work. I hope you go on the 100 word challenge next week. From Joseph. Here’s a link to go on our blog quicker than typing it
http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Anna I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry. I especially love how you began your writing with speech – It made me feel like I was there. I look forward to seeing more of your entries 🙂 keep up the good work!
Well done Anna, what a fantastic 100wc. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. Your use of speech was super and they way you began your piece of writing really captured my interest and made me want to read on. I love the way you ended your writing, leaving it on a cliff hanger really makes your reader think about what could happen next.
Keep up the fantastic work 🙂
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Hi Anna! Well done with your story this week – I really enjoyed it. You made the reader feel nice and safe, listening to Grandpa’s story, and then, with a neat twist at the end, you made us all feel rather nervous! Excellent. Well done, using speech too – it worked so well, and launched the reader straight into the story. I’ll look forward to seeing more of your work!