Louis, that is a very heartfelt plea to improve peoples’ lives. You get to the heart of the problem very quickly and use emotive language to make people feel guilty about not doing enough. I particularly like use of capital letters to stress your key point. Where did you find your facts as I would like to know more? However, I’m not clear on whether we can do more than just donate money. Can you expand on how we should help them?
Hello louis,
I thought your work was very good and cut straight to the point. 100% for persuasiveness and everything else that Report Writing covers. Did you comment on your own work?
From Rafi.
Louis, that is a very heartfelt plea to improve peoples’ lives. You get to the heart of the problem very quickly and use emotive language to make people feel guilty about not doing enough. I particularly like use of capital letters to stress your key point. Where did you find your facts as I would like to know more? However, I’m not clear on whether we can do more than just donate money. Can you expand on how we should help them?
Hello louis,
I thought your work was very good and cut straight to the point. 100% for persuasiveness and everything else that Report Writing covers. Did you comment on your own work?
From Rafi.