Ryan, I really like your choice of words such as “gleaming” and “cautious”. I also enjoyed reading your similes. I thought it was clever how you paced the story but next time, try to include the prompt in your writing. 😀
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Ryan, I really like your choice of words such as “gleaming” and “cautious”. I also enjoyed reading your similes. I thought it was clever how you paced the story but next time, try to include the prompt in your writing. 😀