Hi Maud,
I really enjoyed reading this, especially your choice of words such as “silky” and “numbly”. I thought it was funny how the dragon didn’t particularly like torturing the local town. Once or twice you switched tenses and once you missed out an apostrophe, but apart from that it was great. 🙂
Hi Maud,
I really enjoyed reading this, especially your choice of words such as “silky” and “numbly”. I thought it was funny how the dragon didn’t particularly like torturing the local town. Once or twice you switched tenses and once you missed out an apostrophe, but apart from that it was great. 🙂