hi sophie
I think it is really funny and I would love to have a pet like that it really puts a picture in
my mind. hope it comes to life keep blogging.
from beatrix
That was really descriptive you put loads of similes in your peice, we like all the similes you put in they were great!
We liked the name Ellionkey were its a elephant and monkey.
We also think you don’t need to improve anything because it is brilliant!
Hi Sophie, thank you for entering your 100wc. I really enjoyed reading your description, I could really picture what your animal looked like and even how it moved. I especially liked your use of simile within your writing, this really adds to your description.
Keep up the great work Sophie 🙂
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Hi Sophie – sorry I’m a bit late this week, but I still want to tell you that I thought your piece was wonderful! I love the idea of the Ellionkey, and you have described him very well. Chocolate covered fruit sounds an interesting diet!
hi Sophie
I really liked your work especially your discription
Hi sophie,
I really liked your work and your description. I wish I had a pet like that.
hi sophie
I think it is really funny and I would love to have a pet like that it really puts a picture in
my mind. hope it comes to life keep blogging.
from beatrix
I really liked the simle! sophie
I really liked the simle
That was really descriptive you put loads of similes in your peice, we like all the similes you put in they were great!
We liked the name Ellionkey were its a elephant and monkey.
We also think you don’t need to improve anything because it is brilliant!
from Jasmine and Mathew
Hi Sophie, thank you for entering your 100wc. I really enjoyed reading your description, I could really picture what your animal looked like and even how it moved. I especially liked your use of simile within your writing, this really adds to your description.
Keep up the great work Sophie 🙂
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Hi Sophie – sorry I’m a bit late this week, but I still want to tell you that I thought your piece was wonderful! I love the idea of the Ellionkey, and you have described him very well. Chocolate covered fruit sounds an interesting diet!