What a horrible sounding creature Harry – I’m not sure that I’d want the job if it involved looking after the Creeper (even it’s name sounds unpleasant 🙂 ) Your picture reminds me of when they block out a face to protect a person’s identity on television. Is that to protect me or the creature?
I liked your phrasing ‘They often show up in…’ – a much more interesting way to say they live or you will see them – well done! And it is very effective to put words that you want to emphasise by putting it in capitals.
Congratulations on this weeks 100 word challenge, Mrs Ratcliffe
No Mrs Ratcliffe it is actually this monster is from a video game where everything is made out of blocks. I appreciated your comment and you have inspired me to get down to some more writing : )
Hi Harry, I really like your piece of work because I like the word feisty I thought it was a strong word.
What a horrible sounding creature Harry – I’m not sure that I’d want the job if it involved looking after the Creeper (even it’s name sounds unpleasant 🙂 ) Your picture reminds me of when they block out a face to protect a person’s identity on television. Is that to protect me or the creature?
I liked your phrasing ‘They often show up in…’ – a much more interesting way to say they live or you will see them – well done! And it is very effective to put words that you want to emphasise by putting it in capitals.
Congratulations on this weeks 100 word challenge, Mrs Ratcliffe
No Mrs Ratcliffe it is actually this monster is from a video game where everything is made out of blocks. I appreciated your comment and you have inspired me to get down to some more writing : )