Hello Alfie,
I really enjoyed reading this blog as it had a great story-line. However, remember to include commas and capital letters. If you did that your work would be perfect. Well done and carry on blogging as it is a pleasure to read your work.
From Rafi.
Hello Alfie,
I really enjoyed reading this blog as it had a great story-line. However, remember to include commas and capital letters. If you did that your work would be perfect. Well done and carry on blogging as it is a pleasure to read your work.
From Rafi.