Hi Jude,
I liked the way that you did a review on the Titanic movie. I’m seeing it tomorrow! You made it sound really convincing and you added lots of interesting facts; most of which I didn’t know… Always remember to start your work with a capitol letter though. That was basically the only bad thing so well done!
Hi Jude,
I liked the way that you did a review on the Titanic movie. I’m seeing it tomorrow! You made it sound really convincing and you added lots of interesting facts; most of which I didn’t know… Always remember to start your work with a capitol letter though. That was basically the only bad thing so well done!
Jude
Your work is brilliant and I can’t wait to read more of your work.well done