Hi Freya,
Great work here. I like the idea of a book review. I like the way you have reoccomended it to a certain age group. I was certainly sold. To improve I think you shouldn’t of told the ending. If you don’t people will want to know what happens next. Also you should of said who it is by. Other than that, I love it.
Hi Freya,
Great work here. I like the idea of a book review. I like the way you have reoccomended it to a certain age group. I was certainly sold. To improve I think you shouldn’t of told the ending. If you don’t people will want to know what happens next. Also you should of said who it is by. Other than that, I love it.