Hi Louis! Well done – I really enjoyed your story. I thought it was very well written and I liked the twist at the end very much. I was right there, in the castle with you and suddenly it was all just a story within a story. Terrific stuff. I also like your descriptions which made it seem very real. Good job!
Wow Louis, what a fantastic 100wc, I really enjoyed reading this 🙂 Your sentence structure and the different words you used to start your sentences really impressed me. You also used a variety of descriptive words – well done!
Keep up the super work!
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
From Lorely Team 100WC
Hi Louis! Well done – I really enjoyed your story. I thought it was very well written and I liked the twist at the end very much. I was right there, in the castle with you and suddenly it was all just a story within a story. Terrific stuff. I also like your descriptions which made it seem very real. Good job!
Wow Louis, what a fantastic 100wc, I really enjoyed reading this 🙂 Your sentence structure and the different words you used to start your sentences really impressed me. You also used a variety of descriptive words – well done!
Keep up the super work!
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)