Hi jake hope your well. first of all I would like to tip you of with things you did that I liked. first of all I liked some of the exciting adjectives you used, such as swatted,vigilant and crackling however I dont think you should have killed Tim.
Lovely 100WC post Jake. You have taken the prompt and created a fabulous piece of writing with a great ending. You have used lots of great adjectives which make the story much mor interesting. Well Done!
Hi jake hope your well. first of all I would like to tip you of with things you did that I liked. first of all I liked some of the exciting adjectives you used, such as swatted,vigilant and crackling however I dont think you should have killed Tim.
hi Jake i really like your story because it is very interesting
i love at the end how you said dream and a half. This was a great story. I can’t say anything bad about it.
I liked your writing because you used good discription words like swatted,vilgant,and crackling. good job
Lovely 100WC post Jake. You have taken the prompt and created a fabulous piece of writing with a great ending. You have used lots of great adjectives which make the story much mor interesting. Well Done!