Hey Mia it’s Sophie, I thought your 100wc was amazing but to make it even better maybe you could use similies.
Hey Mia, I think you have done a wonderful job on your 100 word challenge. You could make it even better by maybe using some different words to start your sentences. Well done overall though.
Dear Mia, Did you just described an eatable paradise? That was a wonderful 100wc.
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Hey Mia it’s Sophie, I thought your 100wc was amazing but to make it even better maybe you could use similies.
Hey Mia,
I think you have done a wonderful job on your 100 word challenge. You could make it even better by maybe using some different words to start your sentences. Well done overall though.
Dear Mia,
Did you just described an eatable paradise? That was a wonderful 100wc.