Hey Niysha Sophie here
I loved your blog but to make it even better you could describe this new world a bit more and also you wrote Tom instead of Tim near the end but apart from that it was great!
Niyusha – this is a wonderful post for the prompt. I love your phrases and the way you have set it in a very different land. You are becoming a talented writer so I’m glad to see you sharing your work on 100WC!
What a wonderful peace of writing I perticualy enjoyed the flying skateboard part I think you could be a talented writer also its action packed with fun.
Hey Niysha Sophie here
I loved your blog but to make it even better you could describe this new world a bit more and also you wrote Tom instead of Tim near the end but apart from that it was great!
Niyusha – this is a wonderful post for the prompt. I love your phrases and the way you have set it in a very different land. You are becoming a talented writer so I’m glad to see you sharing your work on 100WC!
Hi, Niyusha
What a wonderful peace of writing I perticualy enjoyed the flying skateboard part I think you could be a talented writer also its action packed with fun.
I think it had a bit of suspence and I loved it! Keep up the good work.