Hi Rhodri,
Well done for this amazing post. I really loved the adjectives you chose to describe the object. But the cleverest part was the way you kept the reader in suspense and didn’t tell us what you found until the last couple of lines. I was guessing what it could be right to the very end. This is a great writing tool. Excellent accuracy Rhodri. Keep up the great work.
Wow,Rhodri, what a good story. You could have used ‘He gave it to Moby who looked at it ‘. Where did you get the idea of a mask, Rhodri?
Hi Rhodri,
Well done for this amazing post. I really loved the adjectives you chose to describe the object. But the cleverest part was the way you kept the reader in suspense and didn’t tell us what you found until the last couple of lines. I was guessing what it could be right to the very end. This is a great writing tool. Excellent accuracy Rhodri. Keep up the great work.