Hi Grace – what a wonderful 100wc entry! You have used masses of beautiful language which really brings you writing to life for your readers. I think my favourite line is ‘it gave the impression that the surface had never been touched’ – fantastic!
Have another look at the final paragraph – is the tense corrects all the way through?
I can’t wait to read more of your work!
Mr K 🙂 http://www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.com
Hi Grace – what a wonderful 100wc entry! You have used masses of beautiful language which really brings you writing to life for your readers. I think my favourite line is ‘it gave the impression that the surface had never been touched’ – fantastic!
Have another look at the final paragraph – is the tense corrects all the way through?
I can’t wait to read more of your work!
Mr K 🙂
http://www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.com