This writing contains lots of action, and the words you have used build tension. It sounds like the start of a very exciting longer piece of writing and makes the reader want to read more. Great work!
This is a super piece of work Ella. Your good use of adjectives and punctuation make it very exciting indeed!
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This writing contains lots of action, and the words you have used build tension. It sounds like the start of a very exciting longer piece of writing and makes the reader want to read more. Great work!
This is a super piece of work Ella. Your good use of adjectives and punctuation make it very exciting indeed!