Tim and Mobys discovery!

Posted on May 20, 2012 by Deleted User
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  1. Kathy @ Team 100WC says:
    May 21, 2012 at 11:14 pm

    Hi George! I like how the end of your story keeps the reader wondering. You used some good descriptive words in your story that made it easy to picture. Just watch your punctuation a bit, and keep up the good work on the 100WC.

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