The name of the bird was very creative but why did they want to catch it?
How did Moby produce a net?
These skills are just what you need to be a real author!!!
I reallly liked the name of the bird it made me laugh.but when you said Moby maid a grunt you had already said by us
and then you repeated it.Anyway well done.How did you think of the name of the bird????
Hello Dexter,
I really liked your idea of that cool creature you have created. However, the name of the bird is very confusing, what inspired you call it that? Maybe next time you can include a few more similes. Apart from that, I really enjoyed it and can’t wait to read some more of your blogs.
What a fabulous title and I must say that I was secretly pleased that such an intriguing and apparently beautiful bird managed to escape the net; it sounds like it should remain in the wild rather than captivity. I wonder how Tim and Moby celebrated their find.
Thank you for sharing your lovely story idea with the 100wc, I really enjoyed reading it and picturing the two friends on their expedition to find the ‘Roxembluboddyblue bird.’
The name of the bird was very creative but why did they want to catch it?
How did Moby produce a net?
These skills are just what you need to be a real author!!!
I reallly liked the name of the bird it made me laugh.but when you said Moby maid a grunt you had already said by us
and then you repeated it.Anyway well done.How did you think of the name of the bird????
Hello Dexter,
I really liked your idea of that cool creature you have created. However, the name of the bird is very confusing, what inspired you call it that? Maybe next time you can include a few more similes. Apart from that, I really enjoyed it and can’t wait to read some more of your blogs.
Sorry, I meant what ispired you TO call it that?
Hello Dexter,
What a fabulous title and I must say that I was secretly pleased that such an intriguing and apparently beautiful bird managed to escape the net; it sounds like it should remain in the wild rather than captivity. I wonder how Tim and Moby celebrated their find.
Thank you for sharing your lovely story idea with the 100wc, I really enjoyed reading it and picturing the two friends on their expedition to find the ‘Roxembluboddyblue bird.’
Mrs Shaw (Team 100wc)