Fandabbydoesy! We loved your poem about the lottery. Your rhymes were great.
If I won the lottery I’d buy a mansion
And build a big extension.
P.S. Do you really want to be a judge on X Factor?
hey great poem Lauren chocolate super market yum ! 😀
but you made one grammatical error ,if I’m correct, which was “I would fly “an” flying carpet” I think it should have been “a”.
see you at school 😉
Fandabbydoesy! We loved your poem about the lottery. Your rhymes were great.
If I won the lottery I’d buy a mansion
And build a big extension.
P.S. Do you really want to be a judge on X Factor?
I would buy a mansion too.
This work is not what I think it’s about someone else.
My dad always talks about winning the lottery
Have any of your parents thought about that too
hi lauren it’s sophie I realy like your poem it’s realy good 🙂
hey great poem Lauren chocolate super market yum ! 😀
but you made one grammatical error ,if I’m correct, which was “I would fly “an” flying carpet” I think it should have been “a”.
see you at school 😉
some times you used ‘an’ when you cold of used ‘a’ but apart from that great poem 🙂