The brilliant 100wc!

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3 Responses to The brilliant 100wc!

  1. Caroline Hardman (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Freya

    I’m glad to hear the 100WC has inspired your writing! This is a really well constructed argument; you have a strong introduction and have explained your points very clearly. I like they way you’ve used ‘in my opinion’ as a sentence opener too. Great job!

  2. Saira says:

    Dear Freya,
    I just wanted to say that I totally agree with you! I love writing stories but I’m sure that even the people who doesn’t like writing will agree with you. You are so persuasive! Well done!
    sincerely,
    Saira

  3. Rainbow magic says:

    Cool what a good story. I think it could win because your bit of writing is really good. 100 WC really does inspire me and my class a lot. I really like your story a lot. I know you stuck to the prompt a lot because of how you have write it.

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