Hello Jude, thanks for this piece. You made effort at ‘showcasing’ the 100wc. That was a fantastic work.
However, you need to take note of your spellings and work extra hard at use of punctuation marks.
Words like their in your writing should have spelt, they are or they’re. Third line from the bottom could have read … Was better than yours. That makes you want to log more…
I believe you can do better and probably make the showcase soon if you work on the areas highlighted. Keep blogging!
Hello Jude, thanks for this piece. You made effort at ‘showcasing’ the 100wc. That was a fantastic work.
However, you need to take note of your spellings and work extra hard at use of punctuation marks.
Words like their in your writing should have spelt, they are or they’re. Third line from the bottom could have read … Was better than yours. That makes you want to log more…
I believe you can do better and probably make the showcase soon if you work on the areas highlighted. Keep blogging!