Dear Liam,
I think your writing was really good but you should check to see if there are any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes. You should use a capital letter at the beggining of each sentence. I think your piece of writing was excellent anyway.
i think i did very well with this piece of writing because i used some good words.
Dear Liam,
I think your writing was really good but you should check to see if there are any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes. You should use a capital letter at the beggining of each sentence. I think your piece of writing was excellent anyway.