Hello Alfie,
This is my first time reading a 100WC challenge entry so it’s great to hear how fantastic you think 100WC challenge is.
I really like how you’ve listed all the good things about 100WC challenge but could you think about starting your sentences with words other than ‘and’ to make it even better next time.
Hello Alfie, this is a good effort at explaining what 100wc is. As Miss Robins mentioned, your writing could be better if you avoided starting sentences with ‘and’ and ‘because’. This is so especially because you repeated ‘and’ so many times as opening word in many of your sentences.
In any case, you gave interesting information about the benefits of blogging. Well done!
Hello Alfie,
This is my first time reading a 100WC challenge entry so it’s great to hear how fantastic you think 100WC challenge is.
I really like how you’ve listed all the good things about 100WC challenge but could you think about starting your sentences with words other than ‘and’ to make it even better next time.
Hello Alfie, this is a good effort at explaining what 100wc is. As Miss Robins mentioned, your writing could be better if you avoided starting sentences with ‘and’ and ‘because’. This is so especially because you repeated ‘and’ so many times as opening word in many of your sentences.
In any case, you gave interesting information about the benefits of blogging. Well done!