I think the topic about water is very interesting. That in 5 lines you have mentioned all of the important info about that. I like how you have used great adjectives about how water falls from the sky. The only improvement is that the 4th line has 8 syllables! However it is still really good.
I think the topic about water is very interesting. That in 5 lines you have mentioned all of the important info about that. I like how you have used great adjectives about how water falls from the sky. The only improvement is that the 4th line has 8 syllables! However it is still really good.