Hello Louis,
I really liked this piece of writing because it gave me a really clear view of why planet Earth is so important. I loved the way that you explained we could donate to charity. However, the way you used that hyphon was wrong. The way you use a hyphon is when you connect two sentences with one another to make the same point. Apart from that everything was fine so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.
Hello Louis,
I really liked this piece of writing because it gave me a really clear view of why planet Earth is so important. I loved the way that you explained we could donate to charity. However, the way you used that hyphon was wrong. The way you use a hyphon is when you connect two sentences with one another to make the same point. Apart from that everything was fine so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.