blue

Posted on May 28, 2012 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to blue

  1. Mrs Southall says:
    May 30, 2012 at 10:59 am

    You make blue sound so appealing for so many reasons. It would be great if the sentences started with capital letters.

  2. Lauren says:
    June 4, 2012 at 12:13 pm

    Really good. Lots of reasons how blue is magnificent. You could
    A) Use full stops
    B) Capital letters
    C) Spellings
    very good

    • Sophie K says:
      June 11, 2012 at 9:24 am

      I agree with your coment I have now improved it and have fixed a few things and I hope that one is better

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