I really enjoyed reading your poem about water. I particularly enjoyed your clever use of the alphabet and the wonderfully creative water usage descriptions. I had no idea that xylophones were made of water or that you were on speaking terms with Zebras!!! I wonder, did it take you a long time to come up with all those clever uses of water or did they come to you in a moment of inspiration? Looking at this poem, I am struggling to see how it can be improved!!
Wow! Your comment has inspired to me to keep writing! I am glad that you have learnt alot from my poem. Most of my poem had come to me in a moment of inpiration and thought with the help of my fantastic friends, Jessica and Grace but some of the lines, I had to think for more than 2 minutes. Thank you for writing to me and I hope you will compliment me more in the future.
Hi Evie,
I really enjoyed reading your poem about water. I particularly enjoyed your clever use of the alphabet and the wonderfully creative water usage descriptions. I had no idea that xylophones were made of water or that you were on speaking terms with Zebras!!! I wonder, did it take you a long time to come up with all those clever uses of water or did they come to you in a moment of inspiration? Looking at this poem, I am struggling to see how it can be improved!!
Well done Evie
Wow! Your comment has inspired to me to keep writing! I am glad that you have learnt alot from my poem. Most of my poem had come to me in a moment of inpiration and thought with the help of my fantastic friends, Jessica and Grace but some of the lines, I had to think for more than 2 minutes. Thank you for writing to me and I hope you will compliment me more in the future.
Thank you Evie! I helped with lines G, V, X etc…