Great Cassady. The description appeals to every sense. I can really imagine not only the scene but the feelings of the characters. I feel I know them already. Will you tell us more?
Hi Cassady
What a imagnitive place, I wish I was There! Can you see some places you can need with commas! And well done for starting your names with a capital letter
Bye
lovely discription cassady.But for next time practise your spelling.
Great Cassady. The description appeals to every sense. I can really imagine not only the scene but the feelings of the characters. I feel I know them already. Will you tell us more?
Hi Cassady
What a imagnitive place, I wish I was There! Can you see some places you can need with commas! And well done for starting your names with a capital letter
Bye