Hi Rosie
That was great(did your sister really stumble on a brick?) Great rhyming! Just a tincy mistake. Remember to spell Devon with a capital D
See you
Bye
Hi Rosie,
Grate rhyming! I like espcialy the bit that says when I was ten I saw Big Ben. Mabey when you are ten you might actually see Big Ben! Like Lauren said remember to spell Devon with a capital D. Ceep up the good work!
Hi Rosie
That was great(did your sister really stumble on a brick?) Great rhyming! Just a tincy mistake. Remember to spell Devon with a capital D
See you
Bye
Thanks for the advice Lauren, and i’m not sure if my sister stumbled on a brick. However, she did stumble on quite a few things at the age of four.
it was good but you could of make the poem rhyme like,
When i was six i learned to do a high five,
Hi Rosie,
Grate rhyming! I like espcialy the bit that says when I was ten I saw Big Ben. Mabey when you are ten you might actually see Big Ben! Like Lauren said remember to spell Devon with a capital D. Ceep up the good work!