Hi Alfie, this piece of writing really makes me think about what is happening in the world. You have used powerful adjectives, and it sounds like you have a lot of knowledge on the subject of wildlife. I love your opening sentence, it goes straight to the point, which is great.
Hi Alfie, this piece of writing really makes me think about what is happening in the world. You have used powerful adjectives, and it sounds like you have a lot of knowledge on the subject of wildlife. I love your opening sentence, it goes straight to the point, which is great.
Nice job in your persuasive writing. I love WWF too, and I think you have written a very lovely piece.