my brother

Posted on May 29, 2012 by Deleted User
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  1. Amy Parkin (100WC) says:
    May 29, 2012 at 3:36 pm

    Hi Lucas,

    It is lovely to see that you have written your persuasive piece of writing about your brother – you must really love him!

    Remember your capital letters.

    Amy 🙂

    • Ryan says:
      May 29, 2012 at 5:54 pm

      I do agree with you, but I must add on to your comment; Lucas, remember your full stops.

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