Lovely poem. I really like the description of a shark swimming like a torpedo. Be honest though, if you were caught in the sea by a shark would you hang around and admire its torpedo-like qualities or would you swim like mad for your life?
More seriously, will you write some more tanker poems about other water animals for us to enjoy. Also, where did you get the ideas for some of the adjectives that you used?
Sharks may have up to 3,000 teeth at one time. The teeth are arranged in rows; when one tooth is damaged or lost, it is replaced by another. Most sharks have about 5 rows of teeth at any time.
Guess we both learnt something new, didn’t we?
We like your big describing words and you added some dramaticness by making the words bigger.
sincerely fred and connor,year 3 stevenson
Lovely poem. I really like the description of a shark swimming like a torpedo. Be honest though, if you were caught in the sea by a shark would you hang around and admire its torpedo-like qualities or would you swim like mad for your life?
More seriously, will you write some more tanker poems about other water animals for us to enjoy. Also, where did you get the ideas for some of the adjectives that you used?
Thanks
I really like your poem and especially your your ajectives. I think a shark has 5 rows of teeth, is that really true?
No Shay a shark actully has 2 rows of teeth
Hi Theo,
Sharks may have up to 3,000 teeth at one time. The teeth are arranged in rows; when one tooth is damaged or lost, it is replaced by another. Most sharks have about 5 rows of teeth at any time.
Guess we both learnt something new, didn’t we?