Hi Rafi, your work was amazing again I don’t know how you can right that well with all the powerful words and adjectives and putting the punctuation in the right place I just don’t know how you do it, anyway I really like the description “bullets whistled through the air” it is a really good description but maybe you should use the word “suddenly” only once and then use a different word. Still, it was really good.
Hi Rafi, your work was amazing again I don’t know how you can right that well with all the powerful words and adjectives and putting the punctuation in the right place I just don’t know how you do it, anyway I really like the description “bullets whistled through the air” it is a really good description but maybe you should use the word “suddenly” only once and then use a different word. Still, it was really good.
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