Great poem. The words created a rhythm like the waves on the ocean. Also the poem cleverly combined art and science so that the reader could enjoy the poetry whilst learning about precipitation. Would liked to have found out why it was precipitations “favourite day”. What an adventurous journey the molecules of water go on!! Lovely Merley. x
Thanks daddyfor saying you liked my poem! And saying it had art and sience in it.I said it was “precipitations favrioute day” because it rhymed with the other sentence! Thanks!
Great poem. The words created a rhythm like the waves on the ocean. Also the poem cleverly combined art and science so that the reader could enjoy the poetry whilst learning about precipitation. Would liked to have found out why it was precipitations “favourite day”. What an adventurous journey the molecules of water go on!! Lovely Merley. x
Thanks daddyfor saying you liked my poem! And saying it had art and sience in it.I said it was “precipitations favrioute day” because it rhymed with the other sentence! Thanks!
Wow – great vocabulary – molecules , precipitation. I also love lines 5 and 6 .
Thanks Jane saying you liked my work! Next time you could maybe ask a question. And say how I could improve it!