Hi Imogen,
Well done that you have tried to put yourself in their shoes on the one hand and described how different life is in your country on the other. Thanks for submitting this thoughtful letter to the 100 WC.
Hello Imogen, You have used some good word choices in your writing, I like your use of ‘unfortunate’ and ‘considered’. Be careful with your use of exclamation marks, it doesn’t necessarily fit that well to use one after your name. I like how you ask Fatimata a question in your letter. Well done!
Hi Imogen,
Well done that you have tried to put yourself in their shoes on the one hand and described how different life is in your country on the other. Thanks for submitting this thoughtful letter to the 100 WC.
Hello Imogen, You have used some good word choices in your writing, I like your use of ‘unfortunate’ and ‘considered’. Be careful with your use of exclamation marks, it doesn’t necessarily fit that well to use one after your name. I like how you ask Fatimata a question in your letter. Well done!