This is such a lovely letter Freya. It shows sympathy towards Fatima but encouragement too. You have worded it in a really sympathetic and sensitive way. I like how you have tried to find something in common with Fatima yet have said that her situation is much worse. I also love the way you have tried to spur her on with the words, ‘you can do this!’
A pleasure to read.
Well done!
This is such a lovely letter Freya. It shows sympathy towards Fatima but encouragement too. You have worded it in a really sympathetic and sensitive way. I like how you have tried to find something in common with Fatima yet have said that her situation is much worse. I also love the way you have tried to spur her on with the words, ‘you can do this!’
A pleasure to read.
Well done!
Mrs Prior (Team 100WC)
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