Water Simile Poem

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7 Responses to Water Simile Poem

  1. Armelle says:

    Wow Isoble you poems really good I like the way you’ve also made it rhyme.

  2. JANE (Alice's Mum) says:

    I love your poem. I particularly love the first 2 lines – rivers will always make me think of a goose on the loose from now on.

  3. Deborah Denner (Isobel's mum) says:

    Lovely onomatopoeia in the splish and splash (just had to look up how you spell that!) What a lovely language we have to play with!

  4. Sophie says:

    Hey issie sophie here your poem was great i loved all your ryming words well done!

    • Isobel says:

      Thanks so much I did not know so many people would comment on this poem, I did that a long time ago!

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