You have included some interesting details about your life that I think Fatimata will enjoy finding out about. You have also shown your feelings, which makes the letter more personal. Well done.
Grace you wrote a very nice letter to Fatimata. I’m sure she would enjoy hearing about what you do, and that you feel she is lucky to have seen a cow. It was also nice of you to be concerned about her and telling how you help less fortunate people. Good job writing on the 100WC.
You have included some interesting details about your life that I think Fatimata will enjoy finding out about. You have also shown your feelings, which makes the letter more personal. Well done.
Miss Millwater, Norbridge Academy
Grace you wrote a very nice letter to Fatimata. I’m sure she would enjoy hearing about what you do, and that you feel she is lucky to have seen a cow. It was also nice of you to be concerned about her and telling how you help less fortunate people. Good job writing on the 100WC.