Hello Louis,
I really liked this post because you put a lot of effort into sorting it all through-the way you set out the whole post, from top to bottom. It must have been really hard to string together a post which is not even related to your age group. Although I did find a few mistakes in it:
1. ‘Company’ was spelt ‘comapny’.
2. ‘Could’ was spelt ‘oculd’.
3. ‘Professional’ was spelt ‘proffesional’.
4. ‘Something’ was written twice together.
Louis, I am used to you correcting your work before you write it! Try better next time.
From Manon (with a bit of help from her brother).
Hello Louis,
I really liked this post because you put a lot of effort into sorting it all through-the way you set out the whole post, from top to bottom. It must have been really hard to string together a post which is not even related to your age group. Although I did find a few mistakes in it:
1. ‘Company’ was spelt ‘comapny’.
2. ‘Could’ was spelt ‘oculd’.
3. ‘Professional’ was spelt ‘proffesional’.
4. ‘Something’ was written twice together.
Louis, I am used to you correcting your work before you write it! Try better next time.
From Manon (with a bit of help from her brother).