briliant powim from clem
hi maddie
this poem is fantastic it would be my favorite poem
by Vova Karin
Maddie,
Great poem there I loved all the ryhm it sound’s so nice when you sing it or say it .
Hey Maddie ,
I liked your rhyming words Maddie but, you can improve if you made the end ryme. My favorite lines were ‘ swift swooper’ and loud hooter.
from Amalia and Tran
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briliant powim from clem
hi maddie
this poem is fantastic
it would be my favorite poem
by Vova Karin
Maddie,
Great poem there I loved all the ryhm it sound’s so nice when you sing it or say it .
Hey Maddie ,
I liked your rhyming words Maddie but, you can improve if you made the end ryme.
My favorite lines were ‘ swift swooper’ and loud hooter.
from Amalia and Tran