Hi Sophie
I like it how you did different lines for different reasons why you like blue. You could do more description. Why did you do different coulors for the writing i just thinks its hard to read, what do you think?
Very good exspecaily as you thought up of lot’s of reasons. Are you a fan of the royal family to know about the ring?
Just remeber to use capital letters at the start of sentences and full stops at the end.
Hi sophie,
I really liked your ‘blue’ writing and i also liked your differen colour words . I think you mean: There are lots of things about blue,here are some reasons :
Hi Sophie
I like it how you did different lines for different reasons why you like blue. You could do more description. Why did you do different coulors for the writing i just thinks its hard to read, what do you think?
Very good exspecaily as you thought up of lot’s of reasons. Are you a fan of the royal family to know about the ring?
Just remeber to use capital letters at the start of sentences and full stops at the end.
Hi sophie,
Your piece was very emotional, it made me happy. Try to put more full stops at the end of sentences apart from that it was brillant.
Hi Sopie,
I really liked your story it was quite sad and i think you where supposed to say there are lots of things about blue,(comma) here are some reasons
Semir.
Hi sophie,
I really liked your ‘blue’ writing and i also liked your differen colour words . I think you mean: There are lots of things about blue,here are some reasons :