blood and guts

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2 Responses to blood and guts

  1. lauryn says:

    I liked how you described the blood trickled down

  2. Mia says:

    Hey Polly,
    That was I adored This part of your piece’A huge black empty hole screeching sounds entered the room’ you should of put a comma between hole,screeching sounds.

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