Hi Rafi
I enjoyed reading your story! I ended up wondering who you are in the story – because most people probably wouldn’t get up in the night to eat carrots! I thought perhaps you were an animal! You have used some very colourful words, and it is always great to use new and different words. I like your use of the word ‘sauntered’.
Hi Rafi
I enjoyed reading your work.
When I started to read your work it reminded me of my little cousin waking up at night
going down stairs to eat some vegetables.My favourite parte was the end when you rote in capital letters
BIG TROUBLE it was my favourite part because it had that dramatic part.
From Lorely Team 100WC
Hi Rafi
I enjoyed reading your story! I ended up wondering who you are in the story – because most people probably wouldn’t get up in the night to eat carrots! I thought perhaps you were an animal! You have used some very colourful words, and it is always great to use new and different words. I like your use of the word ‘sauntered’.
Hi Rafi
I enjoyed reading your work.
When I started to read your work it reminded me of my little cousin waking up at night
going down stairs to eat some vegetables.My favourite parte was the end when you rote in capital letters
BIG TROUBLE it was my favourite part because it had that dramatic part.