LOUIS H

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3 Responses to LOUIS H

  1. larissa says:

    good describeing wood’s . that was a brilliand poem about a ”bad boy.”

  2. Alexander says:

    Hi Louis
    Completely blown away by your poem loved the change at the end but you could have added a bit more description
    Alexander

  3. Milla says:

    Ha Ha good laugh but could have added some more metephors, simmilies and aliteration overall though it was great

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