Hi Grace i really like your little story it`s exellent i wish i could write really good storys like you. Also do you like writing storys? What storys do you like to write for exsample: adventure storys, fairy storys, animal storys or fantisy storys etc.
furthermore is this the end of the story? or is there more?
Hey Grace,
I loved your story!
The way you said: “out of the corner of my eye” & “the gushing sapphire waterfall” really build a crystle clear image of the sceane.
I enjoyed the part where the handle turened into a kind-of human and ran away.plus I could really hear you saying the NOOO at the end.
Maybe next time youcould have a build up to the story! why was the charecterlooking for the door???
Hi Grace i really like your little story it`s exellent i wish i could write really good storys like you. Also do you like writing storys? What storys do you like to write for exsample: adventure storys, fairy storys, animal storys or fantisy storys etc.
furthermore is this the end of the story? or is there more?
hay that is great how did you come up with it
hi grace,i love your story it ‘s really intriged me ,your a fantastic writer . Are you going write what happens next? if you are , i can’t wait
Hey Grace,
I loved your story!
The way you said: “out of the corner of my eye” & “the gushing sapphire waterfall” really build a crystle clear image of the sceane.
I enjoyed the part where the handle turened into a kind-of human and ran away.plus I could really hear you saying the NOOO at the end.
Maybe next time youcould have a build up to the story! why was the charecterlooking for the door???