WEEK 34 suddenly i saw

Posted on June 19, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to WEEK 34 suddenly i saw

  1. Beatrix says:
    June 19, 2012 at 9:16 pm

    Hi Jesse
    This is an exciting story.
    However you didn’t use any full stops or capital I.
    So I think you could have taken a bit more time on your work.
    The story you have created is good because I got a clear picture in my
    head.
    I hope you keep on blogging.
    Don’t forget to quadblog.
    From Beatrix

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