100 Word Challenge – The sun drown place

3 Responses to 100 Word Challenge – The sun drown place

1. Mrs Skinner says:

   February 8, 2012 at 1:56 pm

   This is a very atmospheric piece Grace. I could see it as a film with mist swirling around. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination on the 100WC.

   Could I just mention though that I found it difficult to read in that font. Maybe it is because I’m an old lady!! 😉
2. Grace (St. John Vianney) says:

   February 9, 2012 at 3:19 pm

   Dear Grace,

   I really liked this story. I thought that you did a good job using your imagination. Good Job!
3. Anna S. (St. John Vianney) says:

   February 9, 2012 at 3:20 pm

   Very original. Maybe you should use names, because I found it a little difficult to make which character was which.

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