Hi Rafi, this is a fantastic piece of writing for the 100 Word Challenge. You have used some super vocabulary and a range of sentences. You’re opening phrase gets the reader immediately hooked and ending with a question just leaves the reader wanting to read even more.
A huge well done!
Mrs Stones http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Hi Rafi, this is a fantastic piece of writing for the 100 Word Challenge. You have used some super vocabulary and a range of sentences. You’re opening phrase gets the reader immediately hooked and ending with a question just leaves the reader wanting to read even more.
A huge well done!
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/