Hello Connor,
I thought your five sentence challenge was very effective as it got its point across and gave the reader a vivid picture in their mind. I also loved the way you highlighted each sentence a different color to show you have done five sentences. Keep up the good work as I can’t wait to read your next blog.
brilliant ajectives and I feel like i am realy there!
good imagination connor. Ace story!
nice ending
I couldn’t really read the light blue sentence. But I read it in the end! Over all it was brilliant!
it is creative and molti coulered
The part about a ”wild chocolate land” was soooooo funny. is the dino a baby he he. the puppy is cool!
Hello Connor,
I thought your five sentence challenge was very effective as it got its point across and gave the reader a vivid picture in their mind. I also loved the way you highlighted each sentence a different color to show you have done five sentences. Keep up the good work as I can’t wait to read your next blog.
Well done for creating five imaginative sentences.